Allissa Carole

the premise of this was great. I was really excited to start this...My excited quickly went down hill. The world building is very lacking. I don't really know much about any of it... also, the character development was so BAM. From one moment to the next, Rachel's feelings changed. Also, the Curse One.... What was that about. Apparently it's unbeatable, and then all of a sudden, some tiny little flute looking thing can control it's every move.. How did that happen? Why does the device control it?I'm disappointed to say the least.So much potential.